amutar

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03 May 2022

love for my brothers i hope i make it .but its a shot im going to risk it.i hope i shoot a hoop and become famous im the dude that maked this. no cap im gonna break this i feel like this is my next mistake it will probably break my heart this is just start . of my life everday i feel like im getting stabed with a knife right .i have nightmares evernight even at the daylight.i hope i live tomorrow till midnight. i feel like an egg that cracks evernight when i crack its time goodbye nope thats not the end of my life thats the end of this song. did i do anything wrong.

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2 years ago

Wassup @radomactsofkale, Thank you for sharing 'amutar' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. 👍 Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

love for my brothers i hope i make it .but its a shot im going to risk it.i hope i shoot a hoop and become famous im the dude that maked this. no cap im gonna break this i feel like this is my next mistake it will probably break my heart this is just start . of my life everday i feel like im getting stabed with a knife right .i have nightmares evernight even at the daylight.i hope i live tomorrow till midnight. i feel like an egg that cracks evernight when i crack its time goodbye nope thats not the end of my life thats the end of this song. did i do anything wrong.

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