Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @joannedempsey, We're gonna review your track 'my own song '. Let's get it! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 You got great bars here. 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Joanne Dempsey

2 years ago

my heart is bleeding but you cant see my blood theres nothing but these feelings but my tears drown in the flood take a look at my face to say these words to you theres no time or place i hope you feel it to i will find a place. where the sun dies down in my darkness day's hanging on a line... and i will try. and i will try and i will try not to bring up the past many times I've tryed to step up and be brave but its no use. i just hid in my cave i work really hard to heal and move on but it doesnt mean that my pain hasnt gone.