day 1

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02 May 2022

run up on me imma put him on a shirt and his momma gon be crying while they lay him in the dirt like 1234 shots he's hurt we do the drive by and then we go skrrrt never catch Me lackin yea he know that I'm alert I'm the top shotta so I gotta come first nigga talkin shit so he had to get murked hit him with the shit fadeaway like I'm dirk Gotta make my momma proud Actions speak louder than words so niggas know I'm speaking loud Niggas spreadin rumors run up on em better watch ya mouth Niggas talkin shii but now they crying cuz the man got ran down Put a thousand on ya head and have Lil brodie take ya life Put the beam on the pole and shii shining real bright Spin up off the block and find the opps right where they hide If he try to run he get hit up in his spine I do this shit for smelly even tho he not alive Promise imma get my get back i don't play about mine 6ix9ine go and get ya gun so I went and got a 9 I'm not lil durk cuz uk imma slide

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2 years ago

Hey @sandeobote, We're gonna review your track 'day 1'. Let's get it! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

run up on me imma put him on a shirt and his momma gon be crying while they lay him in the dirt like 1234 shots he's hurt we do the drive by and then we go skrrrt never catch Me lackin yea he know that I'm alert I'm the top shotta so I gotta come first nigga talkin shit so he had to get murked hit him with the shit fadeaway like I'm dirk Gotta make my momma proud Actions speak louder than words so niggas know I'm speaking loud Niggas spreadin rumors run up on em better watch ya mouth Niggas talkin shii but now they crying cuz the man got ran down Put a thousand on ya head and have Lil brodie take ya life Put the beam on the pole and shii shining real bright Spin up off the block and find the opps right where they hide If he try to run he get hit up in his spine I do this shit for smelly even tho he not alive Promise imma get my get back i don't play about mine 6ix9ine go and get ya gun so I went and got a 9 I'm not lil durk cuz uk imma slide

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