Tortoise and the Hair
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•02 May 2022
dump truck double dutch stuck in missing truck who woulda thought a man like me could make enough now you stuck in the dust cut me off well cut the crust wearing black now im the judge brush you off ive gotta grudge triple pink flare triple doube dog dare running from a rabbit you the tortoise im the hair running from the tortoise you the rabbit im the bear stolen from the rabbit broken quick i dont share stronger than the bear arms fleek so beware maybe hades saved me craving shavings for his wares trading all his savings just to change me into shares wasting all his hating grating gates into a chair waiting paying patient just get a one up there chorus and if i ever want to get one one is all i got and if i ever got two i got it straight from you and if i ever get three you got straight from me and when i wanna get four you know theres more a little belittled crowning up from birth im tuning the whistle to let you know im there the missles what missles i never heard if them when you want to make a move all i ask is when the pinnacle is mystical now you wish for miserable you listen tho from head to toe the music got you spiritual its whimsical i missed it tho i hope you know im joking though its criminal to listen tho cause where did all the lyrics go top of the dome oh my god you said im reading believing the reading got me changed in my seating seeing believing got me bobbin and weaving cheating for cheaters no i never ever cheated cheesing and weezing competition starts to grieving shaking making catastrophes in anatomies diesected in biology its all of me whittled down to a wishing tree granted wishes is the least of me
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Hey @alma.7466, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Tortoise and the Hair', here are our thoughts 💥 Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
dump truck double dutch stuck in missing truck who woulda thought a man like me could make enough now you stuck in the dust cut me off well cut the crust wearing black now im the judge brush you off ive gotta grudge triple pink flare triple doube dog dare running from a rabbit you the tortoise im the hair running from the tortoise you the rabbit im the bear stolen from the rabbit broken quick i dont share stronger than the bear arms fleek so beware maybe hades saved me craving shavings for his wares trading all his savings just to change me into shares wasting all his hating grating gates into a chair waiting paying patient just get a one up there chorus and if i ever want to get one one is all i got and if i ever got two i got it straight from you and if i ever get three you got straight from me and when i wanna get four you know theres more a little belittled crowning up from birth im tuning the whistle to let you know im there the missles what missles i never heard if them when you want to make a move all i ask is when the pinnacle is mystical now you wish for miserable you listen tho from head to toe the music got you spiritual its whimsical i missed it tho i hope you know im joking though its criminal to listen tho cause where did all the lyrics go top of the dome oh my god you said im reading believing the reading got me changed in my seating seeing believing got me bobbin and weaving cheating for cheaters no i never ever cheated cheesing and weezing competition starts to grieving shaking making catastrophes in anatomies diesected in biology its all of me whittled down to a wishing tree granted wishes is the least of me
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