Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi @mellissawarr! Welcome to our feedback of 'TRIP (23:23)'! 💥 The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The effects really give the track a lil' something extra. ⭐ Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Mellissa Warr

2 years ago

like im on tour i be on the road, hate bein stationary I just got to go, puffin on that indo, chronic smoke blowin out the window. if you see me and my car looks like its smokin, specially if u hear me chokin. dont call the popos im just probably tokin. you laugh see but actually, the funny part ifs i aint even jokin. if you know me you probably know I'm going on a roadie, grab the sack, and the bic, you got 5 min to get in if youre going. oh and homie pls and dont forget the stogey. destination unknown, thats what happens when yousmoke on the road, you tend to roam. its my escape from my own, thoughts inside my head, that make me feel alone, dont worry tho we'll head home after were blown.