am trying
Sertz Dew33 Plays
•01 May 2022
I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene
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Hey @sertzdew, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'am trying'! 💥 The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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