minesfact80
minesfact80

Ninja (12:41)

Ninja (12:41)

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01 May 2022

I was cold deene fold deene but look at my self now, i was in back looking like driplord that came out of town, he was cool but he worked in a school with all of his friends that lose, darker ranges than light please blees me with might, all my friends dont like gamming eith flight, ate aye he was back in the trapholds lame ah ni come back tho toward my guys and facts tho, troll yo face come back and roll me now the youtube Dub Was fat and chub, aye I was cold deene fold deene but look at my self my now, i was in the back looking like driplird that came out of town, if u cant rap dont come back and sing loud.

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2 years ago

Hey @minesfact80, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Ninja (12:41)'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Why don't you hop on a Masterclass next to really start honing your skills! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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