Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @jalensmith.7109141, Here's some feedback on your track 'on top of the mountain', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. 👍 Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Ysngang

2 years ago

yo dog sick so i gotta take him to the bog just like ill pull the kit me and my homies we do a drive by like 3 times yo block hot police riding they get behinde my but im speeding just like a bee that can't catch the srt slewed so imma goat it was cold outside so i grabbed a coat im on the top of the mountain like a goat so i gotta get a boat just like im a oat so i wrote a note so i had to do a vote i had float to help me swim just like him