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What's up @9m5kpscdvp, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Lust (23:03:44)'! π₯ Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. π§ The beat is drowning out the vocals a little, try turning the vocals up! Your rhyming is tight. β¨ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat is working well for you! πΌ The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. β You're hittin' the mic at 100mph and we love it! π₯΅ We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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