mess up

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27 Apr 2022

how could you play me how could you play me babby you did me shady you did me shady every i just wonderd why you do this to me like i just had enough cause i just want somebody who gone love and care for me.

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2 years ago

Hey @jatayshiamajor, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'mess up'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

how could you play me how could you play me babby you did me shady you did me shady every i just wonderd why you do this to me like i just had enough cause i just want somebody who gone love and care for me.

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