Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @forgottenhelm1, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Samurai Sample'! 💥 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Forgottenhelm1

2 years ago

So here I am and it's high noon I step outside you'll be here soon Is this what you want? you shoulda stayed in bed now it's me and you fingers and some lead before you step down I'm gonna leave you saggin slumped on the wagon with that funky ten gallon hat, and after that I'll pull out a blunt you know it's fat Women and children running and screamin Praying with the deacon cause I'm about to leave you leakin blam, you shoulda listened ive pull out my hammers now my pistols christened about that time when the smoke began to clear I looked around my right thumb was sheered off at the base I also began to notice a blood stain on my waist A voice, that was for my uncle he said with a chuckle as I fiddled with this puzzle well this is it I guess I'll never know and as I close my eyes to hell my soul will go