battle me

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27 Apr 2022

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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2 years ago

Hey @yeseniamarroquin, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'battle me'! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. 🌠 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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