Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @zaire.7095923, Here's some feedback on your track 'pick up the pen', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Zaire

2 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.