Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @ethanatzmon, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'life '! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat! 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Ethan Atzmon

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.