Apocalypse Raps
Apocalypse Raps

A few Critics

A few Critics

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25 Apr 2022

I knew a few critics that would get too specific and rude, I get it damn you don't like it but gotta be ruthless, tech said it best when he said im an artist and I'm sensitive about my shit, Mood my ain't different! I'd rather hear a slew of excuses as to why u didn't like it, ok aight then! could support and I'd view you different No all I hear from you is crickets, Do you go tell Leonardo to sharpen his sword or Michaelangelo to beat his brush? Nah.. so don't step to me just hush! Before I thrust with my tusks and fuck you up I'm a beast just shush! and make sure to your teeth are brushed when you speak to us Got something to say speak up! Watch me spray and clean up! Like I'm Mr. Clean don't get between me and my you scrub, Spicy and span getting grands stacking like kitchen pans! Get it Crackin like Crack when it's crackling when you have the Bic in hand! I ain't the type to jyst stand with dick in hand nah I'm a man ill manage my attitude like A sandwich, oh shit oh dang oh dammit! Didn't mean to cause that much damage! Didn't mean to create so much havoc! Oh shit he's snapping! Like a branch when it get bent too much by a fat kid and he landed on it and got a branch to the ass like a bad kid Thanks to gravity he finally got his ass beat because his dad hasnt cuz he has been gone this past week so step in the lab with me let's make a track to a beat oh you...can't? so you can't speak!

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2 years ago

Hey @apocalypseraps, We're gonna review your track 'A few Critics'. Let's get it! Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. 👍 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Nice timing! Never left the beat once! The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

I knew a few critics that would get too specific and rude, I get it damn you don't like it but gotta be ruthless, tech said it best when he said im an artist and I'm sensitive about my shit, Mood my ain't different! I'd rather hear a slew of excuses as to why u didn't like it, ok aight then! could support and I'd view you different No all I hear from you is crickets, Do you go tell Leonardo to sharpen his sword or Michaelangelo to beat his brush? Nah.. so don't step to me just hush! Before I thrust with my tusks and fuck you up I'm a beast just shush! and make sure to your teeth are brushed when you speak to us Got something to say speak up! Watch me spray and clean up! Like I'm Mr. Clean don't get between me and my you scrub, Spicy and span getting grands stacking like kitchen pans! Get it Crackin like Crack when it's crackling when you have the Bic in hand! I ain't the type to jyst stand with dick in hand nah I'm a man ill manage my attitude like A sandwich, oh shit oh dang oh dammit! Didn't mean to cause that much damage! Didn't mean to create so much havoc! Oh shit he's snapping! Like a branch when it get bent too much by a fat kid and he landed on it and got a branch to the ass like a bad kid Thanks to gravity he finally got his ass beat because his dad hasnt cuz he has been gone this past week so step in the lab with me let's make a track to a beat oh you...can't? so you can't speak!

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