LIFE , IN A CAPSULE

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JS_RBK 221 ----------------------------------------------------------------- Only 17 trying to live life to the fullest, Life hits you down, but expects you to keep going, ----------------------------------------------------------------- trying to avoid my problems, cant complain cos any girl that's my girl is a model to me, and the friends that I got are great, don't get me wrong the old ones mistake, everyone has stuff they regret just mine, make me feel shit, ----------------------------------------------------------------- Only 17 trying to live life to the fullest, Life hits you down, but expects you to keep going, and keep flowing, I'll use as many beats so I can keep showing, doesn't matter if the songs slowing, I just gotta keep going, ----------------------------------------------------------------- Alot of stuff in my past that I'm ashamed of, my life feels stained, just gotta keep how I feel contained, instead I feel like a dog that's been chained to a shit life, someone pass me a knife, god give me a wife, I wanna settle down, So sad feel like I'm living in a dark cloud, cant cut myself cos I vowed, and Im proud cos I fight Around a crowed, and ill fight anyone in town, make my own beats so I got my own sound, so happy got the girl that I found, ----------------------------------------------------------------- Only 17 trying to live life to the fullest, Life hits you down, but expects you to keep going, ----------------------------------------------------------------- But I don't need girls, most them hoes, don't need to ask, cos that shit shows, We don't go near that, cos we fear that, don't want to get broken again, thats why we smoke blem, ----------------------------------------------------------------- Only 17 trying to live life to the fullest, Life hits you down, but expects you to keep going, -----------------------------------------------------------------

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S1J17

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4 years ago

Mark Blackman

5 months ago

Every beat, every bar, y'all sound like money! 💸🔊 Proud of you Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Jay Villin

5 months ago

fie spitter flow great Art great quality Slidddd 🌊 No 🧢 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Kelechi

4 years ago

lovely and charming. you are right and loving ur voice Delivery: Perfect 💯

Don Achiri

4 years ago

Perfect 👏👏👏👏👏💥💯👍💕Feel free to check my new stuff #Life237 and follow my profile if you like my tracks. Either way much respect 🙏🙏🙏🙏 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Wassup @s1j17, Thank you for sharing 'LIFE , IN A CAPSULE' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: "Make my own beats so I got my own sound, so happy got the girl that I found" 💯 We love this attitude! 💪 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Man, these bars really spin a tale! We're so invested in this track! Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! This was a real deep track, some heavy-hitting bars! Thanks for opening up! 💓 Keep working on that audio quality, there's room to improve this! You have serious potential! 🚀 We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

JohnnyZ

4 years ago

Cool but need more work your flow

cadmus

4 years ago

dope track bro keep it up make sure you follow me for more support Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

🥶91, 😈💀 style 🔥🐐

4 years ago

🔥👍🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

KRAZY-K (LYDACANE)

4 years ago

nice flow 🔥 respect homie 💯 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯