Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @lawrencantspencer, Here's some feedback on your track 'Pick Up The Pen (03:44)', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lord-Plourde

2 years ago

I really like the beat I feel like your delivery and energy was awesome but keep pushing and working on projects to customize to your South don't try to be like anybody else lots of love keep pushing for your dreams

Lawrence

2 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.