Lord-Plourde

2 years ago

three work on the music the delivery and energy was definitely there turn up your volume a little bit when you record the vocals so that I can hear your vocals to the beat and I feel like the rhyme scheme needs a little work but don't give up keep pushing forward

Paballo

2 years ago

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down