Mose man🎙️
Mose man🎙️

chapter one

chapter one

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23 Apr 2022

right now sitting down watching power rangers I like the red one because that's the colour of danger talking about danger, I used to be a story changer, telling lies more than a politician, it was a bad condition, I started reading the Bible and it made me a bigger person, they said I looked stupid because I was always smiling, them not noticing that's how you avoid problems, I even laughed a lot after realising people live inside boxes, they love the darkness, for they know they won't be able to sin outside the box where there's too much brightness, without being judged, to me that is stupid, cause we born sinners it won't change a bit, guess what? I changed how I look, I became more serious, they tell me that's not cool, I tell them "fuck you", I love myself the way I am and that's true people are idiots, even me, myself and I, I let them change my style I didn't choose wisely most likely. I let someone control my life

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2 years ago

practice makes perfect 🔥 I'll never give up

2 years ago

Wassup @mosamogodi, Thank you for sharing 'chapter one' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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