dark horse
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•23 Apr 2022
×200. sick and tired sick and tired of being sick and tired all these facks and play8p haters hate it when a real playa comes from the bottom to pubthe top no pot to piss in no window to throw it out no clout to chase i keep a staright face when i pull the ace of spades its been decades sence could remember how to surender my life over to a power greater than i creata creata 1 creata of all created in his image cant nock me off my pivot im in the spirit i hold him dearest greater is he that live s in me than he who is of this world sit back relax . be still and know that he is god for real so i turnd my life over the care of my father leaving it all at the alter receaving forgiveness to witness the richess that rivets his hands and feet to the cross p
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Hi @spartonwright.6944031! Welcome to our feedback of 'dark horse'! 💥 Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Try practising effects more to see how they work best. This track is an interesting taste but it sounds unfinished and deserves a little more love. The vocals are real quiet and we can't really make out much of what you're rapping about, focus on the mixing stage a little more to really bring the most out of your tracks. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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