lonely

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19 Apr 2022

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2 years ago

Yo @allenbaker.7072013, It's time for us to take a look at 'lonely '! 💥 Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. The effects don't really compliment this track, try to find the right ones for the mood. Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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2 years ago

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