Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @ryanklobertanz, Thank you for sharing 'born blind' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Ryan Klobertanz

3 years ago

they will kill us all baby's born blind it's the systems designe nothing makes sense all all but it all intertwins watch the news belive it all don't question any red lines stay wear mask stay inside now listen children gather round I gotna story to tell ya it's what parents won't tell ya they don't wanna scare ya this world's it's corrupted sick twisted u won't make it in the end there forced system is ment to fail you from from my point of view where all fucked for this world to work System needs to be reconstructed letting people in this county not watch your back kids getting abducted in the streets in there homies in the park there goners find there bones but who's fault is it now? bitch bow to my feet from now on every time you see me stepping guns popping body's dropping people plotting body's rotting while our children watching all this robbing looting killing you don't understand the sycle repete as a kid it's mindfilling now imagine no heaven it's a mind controlling listen to me or u burn forever sounds like shit suck my dick little bitch u don't know shit if it's then ig I'm fucked but im not going to not live bitch by a few rules in the end I'm the one to die just know I'll die happy smoking a cig crying goodbye see ya never