Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

What's up @calebhenry.7070435, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Waves'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio? Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2knoplay

2 years ago

yeah I know exactly what to say it's about this day and the ocean waves let me explain I was in the water then I thought I seen a pot or a lot and lot of rock but just in one spot that made me think that im about to get binked I bend over then find a four leafe clover I got lucky I tried to get even more lucky but turns out it was a dream and all of that was never ever seen.