Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @gervellefranklin, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'lilriches'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Great beat choice, really works with the track! The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Gervelle Franklin

2 years ago

I'll take it Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.