BIG TOM1

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @lashantayflanagan, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Firebeats (17:59)'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

LaShantay Flanagan

2 years ago

yeah it's a garden Dolly and he know I'm going hard it's your trying to play me I'm a flake I like y'all don't don't play with me y'all want to act like some dolls so I can play it when I get the job out so I got a little song for you don't let them niggars talk about the niggars playing stay in your child place a don't want to be make a talk about you like that cuz you know what they going to take advantage of your kindness and I don't think you want that so the thing is to get a new Niger on them and cheese on them niggahs saying nothing good I rather to be with my family just to be with a Niger. Pooh back again like I said imma see y'all later hcap