Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @leelanddabest, Here's some feedback on your track 'Astronaut (11:39)', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Improvisating on tracks is a very hard skill to master, keep grindin' with it and you will get there. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. We'd suggest you give our Masterclass feature a try to help build up your confidence and timing! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

leelanddabest

2 years ago

Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself