Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @bisramheeralall, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'make it', here are our thoughts 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 You might benefit from turning the vocals down just a little, they're a bit loud in the mix! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bisram Heeralall

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.