Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi @djdavin! Welcome to our feedback of 'bj davin'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Nice improvisation with the lyrics, soundin real good. 🧠 Your timing is great, nicely done. 🌠 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Djdavin

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.