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Yo @ngyadlnxhy! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Brook and Jonathan '! 💥 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! If you could improve your lighting, it would really help the video. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
this hoes teeth R fucked🤮
Focus on my money shit bitch knows I’m legit come at me on some funny shit just trying to get rich I got Niggas and they don’t snitch fake ass nigga bitch so I got to hit a lick main focus is this money shit it’s too hard to quit I gotta be on some shit and imma focus on the money shit so I got to hit a lick Negas ain’t flip shit so I gotta take a dip foreign cars in my whip that’s to many bitch so I gotta take a shit too many nuggets in my mix mama always told me stay legit fake friends ain’t shit when they see an ops there’s snitch that a bitch so focus on on this money
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