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Yo @bigboi5823! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Darkness Within'! 💥 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Develop your story-telling to help your track shine through. We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 At times it sounded like you prioritised speed over staying on that beat. 911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! 🧨 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
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