Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @bonez30, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'ballin'! 💥 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

bonez30

2 years ago

ballin on you bitches tryna make ah living/ i gotta feed my children/ any means necessary i dont care about your opinion/ if u feel some type ah way/ bitch do sum/ bitch we is about to have fun/ the gun keep em on the run/ loose lips end up with R.I.P pictures get the picture/ you will be the next to meet the reeper/ promise i wont miss you betta think befo you make ah diss ( bitch, bitch) you betta think befo you make ah diss i made mistakes that i cant take back/ in black jack where the real niggas at/ fuck with me then we gone paint your face/ real niggas we go back since my space you bet not say ah thang bout my crew i hang/ we maintain focus and do our thang/ savage life means everywhere you go betta keep your pipe/ i would rather lay in bed all day and fuck my wife fuck this shit ima finish him then yell to the judge im innocent/ these pussy niggas got me really bent think i wont up this pole and end shit force this niggas into submission/ listen it was ah fucked up decision but im on the road to the riches/ make ah million while im ballin on you biches verse 2 the future is now bitch make that ass bounce/ smoking on about ah ounce holla if ya hear me on my tupac shit/ its about to 2pacaliptic real quick anybody come ima distroy/ turn man intoy boys beef i dont entertain but i keep that thang/ say ya prayers befo i blow out your brains but i dont promote violence i stay solid i want ah bitch with low mileage