Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @jakeshields, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'the truth of life', here are our thoughts 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jake Shields

2 years ago

i love my life but is hard to live i im sorry but sometimes i just want to die you can see see you up in heaven or hell