Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @shakurjackson, We're gonna review your track 'stop playing'. Let's get it! Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. 👍 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Try improving your recording quality if you can. The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Shakur Jackson

2 years ago

so hard wish i can make it so so hard in life i just wish you were here for me to come home from work and see you gone i wish you were there but you aint shit you just mad cause i found a new bitch because she the shit and you aint shit