Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @johnnybthafresho.g, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'dear bum'! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. 👍 The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good choice of beat! 🎼 Yess, liking your recording quality here, very clear. ✔ This track makes the listener tap into their emotions, well done. 💜 You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

johnnybthafreshO.G

2 years ago

who would have ever thought you and i would be friends,after i came to your house with my gun looking for my check .i had to pistol whip your friend because he was being shady ,and all i was trying to do was save your dog that i didnt even know .dear bum thank you for allowing into your lifes ,but your mom isnt the nicest person in the world but when it comes to you shes got your back .i have to go away for awhile in eleven more days,so just in case we dont see each other again no in your heart johnny baca loves you. well its time fir me to end this song so ill do it like this dear bum when your feeling down play my song and try not to forget me boy love johnny your friend allways. causeways