Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @shardaeebrown, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Life is Hard (21:02)'! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Shardaee Brown

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.