Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @nehemiahwhite, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'king von for life', here are our thoughts 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Nehemiah white

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.