Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @wrv2m68gmt, There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Go easy on some of the lyrics, you might end up alienating some listeners. Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. You're slightly off on your timing. You gotta practice, listen back and practice again to get it right! The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Check out our Masterclasses for help with lyrics and recording your next track! This track needs a bit of work. We can hear your passion for rap and we like the energy. However, the recording quality has really let you down. If you can work on this and ensure your vocals are crisp we know your tracks will live up to their potential! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

RI309

2 years ago

Check out my contest track #ImOnThePursuit Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Bo Jangles

2 years ago

Please check out #jacksfuneral and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥