Life Story๐
#RBHF Vol78 2004!! mama had me, wen i was little life was good , life was easy life was smooth, life was cool life was nice wen i turned 12 life was tough , life was harsh life was bad i had to hustle chase the bag Face the hood kills my pains wen i turned 16 life was normal , life was coping Red eyes in hood moving some bags stuccin sm racks shopping on ice Fuckin some bitches wen i turned 18 life was sweet , life was dope fuckin some holes gettings the bags Going to clubs Driving lambo dealing with niggaz bitches !!
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Hey @remy_razzy, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Life Story๐'! ๐ฅ You got great bars here. ๐ Your rhyming is tight. โจ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. ๐ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. ๐ This is super chill, a real nice vibe. ๐ Try adding some of the in-app effect to your next track to take it to a whole new level. Dope track mane! The delivery could be a bit more exciting but that's also subjective. Would say add some ad libs to add some character to the track if possible. You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! ๐ค We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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