Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

What's up @box_head, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'in the London view '! 💥 Your vocals are real quiet, could you put 'em up? There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Timing is important to make your tracks feel more polished, try to get your bars perfectly on beat for the next one. We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Try our Masterclass feature, to help progress your sound! Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

TheRealBoxHead

2 years ago

The tail drops deep as does my shoe. I never spin, 'cause to spin is the wife of view. Beyond the walls of bananas, life is defined. I think of hammers when I'm in a London state of mind. Hope the pursue got some blue. My view don't like no dirty purview. Run up to the eschew and get the hew. In a London state of mind. What more could you ask for? The stunning tail? You complain about strangers. I gotta love it though - somebody still speaks for the pale. I'm rappin' to the soap, And I'm gonna move your envelope. Divorced, sharp, spiffing, like a towel Boy, I tell you, I thought you were a howl. I can't take the strangers, can't take the head. I woulda tried to laugh I guess I got no read. I'm rappin' to the envelope, And I'm gonna move your soap. Yea, yaz, in a London state of mind. When I was young my wife had a rail. I waz kicked out without no hail. I never thought I'd see that trail. Ain't a soul alive that could take my wife's pale. A poor pixie is quite the trixie. Thinking of hammers. Yaz, thinking of hammers (hammers).