Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @ljthejitinsota, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'yessir '! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Great beat choice, really works with the track! The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

ljthejitinsota

2 years ago

Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself