Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @tanbwoi, Here's some feedback on your track 'first', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

tanbwoi

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.