Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @derronnelson.9772, It's time for us to take a look at '3rd MiXTãPë# 10_By:DerronND'! 💥 We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Derron Nelson

2 years ago

Ayo, I’m too fly, I should be where the cloud at, Only good vibes, You should try that, I got a good view, The ocean clear from up here I can see through, That’s why the sky's blue, So let the sunshine, We watch the sunset, Another summer night, The moon light is next, Yeah, I’m so amazed when I star gaze, Look, If they could talk I wonder what they say, huh I guess I’m caught up in the moment, As time fly, the sun rise Before you know it, You only live once you gotta enjoy it, After the summer leave, Then it’s autumn leaves, look, Before you know it, it’s December, So let it snow, It’s the time for the winter, They say April showers Bring May flowers, Well I’m a give ‘em to my summer When it’s time for her, Them good vibes