birf

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03 Apr 2022

gbLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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2 years ago

Yo @malakicoles, It's time for us to take a look at 'birf'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

gbLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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