Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @doublenays, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Cold nights '! 💥 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

doublenays

2 years ago

Cold nights I’m trying live a long life nobody holding me nobody help me they all hate me say u luv me but u play around with everybody else so just stop playing with my feelings I’m a cold hearted mother fucker i only care about me stabbed in my back so many times Cold nights I’m trying live a long life nobody holding me nobody help me. I keep saying I don’t want u every time i see u u build me up again playing with other people but don’t think off my feelings I keep saying fuck u anti mines when u flirt with me I’m thinking u want me but its just a dream now Cold nights I’m trying live a long life nobody holding me nobody help me