Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @oakleymcdermott! Thanks for sharing 'life is hard' with us! 💥 Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

oakley mcdermott

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.