Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Wassup @joshpommerening, Thank you for sharing 'ahhhh' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Josh Pommerening

2 years ago

.King kong ain't got shit on me And even the vegans can get  beef for free These pigs are trippin like lsd Fuck the government and fuck the police I don't fuck with them like they got stds and got gangbanged by covid and leprosy I got these females on their double knees And then they bust out the double d's Hands up this is a stick up... you with the lazy eye silver sun pick ups. I came to bring the drama like Obama did Osama zen the Dalai Lama I am a tatted-up piranha Smells Like Teen Spirit In This b**** Nirvana Will Smith slaps ain't got s*** on me even these white girls can get the D for free Smells Like Teen Spirit but we ain't talking R.Kelly I'm all up in your face like big titties  take me to the place where all the bitches be on my Buddha s*** sitting under the Bodhi Tree a street ar