Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @joshuaesner.6954787, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'pain'! 💥 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Joshua Esner

2 years ago

so much pain this shit run deep i lose sleep starting to go crazy from all this bullshit i go threw on a daily steady stressin on this pipe god knows i aint living rite my intentions are good im mis understood and the ones i hurt tha most is my children not around like i should b missen ball games say im comen over and never show it aint you its me here lately when i look in tha mirrior i dont know who i see look just like my dad and he gone in tha coffin wont never get my nigga back only family i had left on that side me and momma dont talk im always fucking up and i kno it my fault but im tryna change lanes im all alone just tryna make it cant fake it wit yall i dont fuck wit yall cuz all the squares out my circle yall claim ta b my nigga but u switched up what tha fuck vant let that stop me cant b worried bout what tha next nigga sayn god put me on this earth for a purpose i aint perfect mistakes ima make em gotta learn from em only live life once when it over cant start over so watch tha cards kno when ta hold em know when ta fold em i love all my kids from tha youngest to tha oldest sorry i been so distant i never ment to all those day i wont get back i fucked uo i admit that broke a promise to my 2nd child daddy gone b gone awhile one one foot in tha pen and one out tha door no matter what i love u down to ur core and i wont stop till im no longer breathing wtf was u at when i was sleeping in judds car madder fact i dont give a fuck bout that ima make it cant break me pain i can fade it my love u cant replace it fall down im getn rite back up shackit off my head stay to the ski even when im down spark this blunt up and spinn tha block riden threw tha city thinking bout tha good times how me and u used ta ride now u knowjere on my side it like u a stranger u cant even fuck wit a pic of me u used b crazy bout me iguess time goes on imotion go on and fade away its cool tho ima die alone i was born alone im tryna die wit sum cash cuz i wasnt born wit it and when i die cant take it wit me life crazy then a bitch so i keep this bitch off safety wit one in tha chamber no killer but i will up this bitch and let it talk tired being unfit for my kids look in tha mirror an say gaoddamn wake up an to everybody i been distant to that mean i care about you love u from a distance i tend to hurt tha one closes to me tha most and the day my dad got diagnosed my life been hell but im still here and i dont plan on leaving and i kno u prolly dont believe me words dont mean shit ima show u u tha only one i want in my life i chose you sorry i told u i love