Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @scallion.6887890, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on ' BIRTHDAY NIGHT'! 💥 Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

SCALLION

2 years ago

BIRTHDAY NIGHT the day we met was the best day of my life i new we would make it last even though there is past My Heart Longs for You Baby you complete me or I do, It's just the cozy two, I think I have fallen for you too hard, It's a great and wonderful start, With me around,you have all the reasons to cheer,now your birthday night is all i feel right but it might just be the day i... the day we met was the best day of my life i new we would make it last even though there is a past you are my queen you turned me green first i met you on the stairs we became a pair I am Overwhelmed, Dear You sparkle and overwhelm me With your fucken love and beauty exclusively that I can see. A day away from you seems tragic But hours with you feels like magic sometimes i feel we need a earthquake(earthquake) to shake this love rather Wishing you a wonderful birthday(birthday) That you and I can celebrate it in our own way(way) the day we met was the best day of my life i new i would make it last even though there is a past