chronic days
Gabriel PimentelWake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feelingβs sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.
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Really good use of bars abs beats π₯π₯ awesome flow too Keep it coming
Wassup @gabrielpimentel.7003724, Thank you for sharing 'chronic days' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Your improvisation is dope, keep up that lyrical fire. π§ Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ This beat is working well for you! πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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