Robadob
Robadob

Happy (00:27:17)

Happy (00:27:17)

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01 Apr 2022

I just wanna be happy in this world I’m trying for my sons and little girl I can’t stop thinking bout the shit I did But I didn’t know therapy be my last bid It’s been killing me to be like this inside I just want to run lock the door and hide But that’s the coward way of me trying to Fix my anxiety When you left I lost a piece of me So now I sit back with all this miseray Thinking bout the shit I could change But every time I did I put myself in dannnger Popping pills to try and see the end of me Living in this world pills are fee I tried for the best I could be But you pushed me away and never could find the right key I just want to be happy right now I want to be happy but you bring me down Can’t deal with this anymore so I’ll go Just remember all I wanted to do was praise you Sippin on the beer not trying to react Cause my mental stability stayed intact You brought me down low You said you loved me so now I’m just chillin try collect all the dough I’d do anything for you But now this is something For me to do We stuck together like glue We Even made our own crew But you left without any type of clue

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2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

2 years ago

Hey @robadob, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Happy (00:27:17)'! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Recording quality distracting from the overall feel of the track fam! Def wanna watch the levels of the mix and even the distance you record from the mic because it all matters. We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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